Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
×

:iconconfusedlittlekitty: More from ConfusedLittleKitty


More from deviantART



Details

Submitted on
October 20, 2006
File Size
627 bytes
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
120
Favourites
1 (who?)
Comments
30
Downloads
1
×
Two months ago my world came crashing to a halt
Recently someone floored it and sped away

Without directions or map
I'm speeding down roads I've never been on
Yet they seem so familiar

Darkness engulfs me
I can't see were I'm going
But there's a light in the distance

I aim for the light
But as it come closer my eyes begin to focus

I slam on the brakes
But its too late
I've killed every ounce of control I had in my life
just a train of thought I thought fits better as a poem then a journal

and I'm not saying any of this is a bad thing I really don't know yet
Add a Comment:
 
:icontrelore:
TreLore Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2006
Brilliant
Reply
:iconconfusedlittlekitty:
ConfusedLittleKitty Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
its one big metaphor
Reply
:icontrelore:
TreLore Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2006
well it was still brilliant
Reply
Hidden by Owner
Hidden by Owner
:icontori-inazuma:
Tori-Inazuma Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2006  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's really well written. It doesn't seem sad, yet a mix of emotions. I like it ^_^
Reply
:iconconfusedlittlekitty:
ConfusedLittleKitty Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! Thats what I trying for.
Reply
:icontori-inazuma:
Tori-Inazuma Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2006  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:dance:
Reply
:icontsutsuku-chan:
Tsutsuku-chan Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2006
Wow...thats sad...and.......sad. Yeah. :cry:
Reply
:iconconfusedlittlekitty:
ConfusedLittleKitty Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
its not suppose to be sad. I'm actually quite happy with how things are turning out. This is just s train of thought I had while driving to work today.
Reply
Add a Comment: